Thursday, February 16, 2023

The Only Story by Julian Barnes

The Only Story by Julian Barnes

Worksheet 1 Based on ChatGPT 

1.Introduction

a.Brief summary of Julian Barnes's "The Only Story".(ChatGPT)

"The Only Story" by Julian Barnes is a novel about a man named Paul who recounts the story of his first and only love affair, which took place in the 1960s when he was 19 years old and the woman, Susan, was 38. The novel explores the themes of aging, love, and regret as Paul reflects on the impact that this one relationship had on the course of his life. Through the lens of his memories, the reader is invited to consider the nature of love, the passage of time, and the choices we make that shape our lives.

b .Explanation of how ChatGPT can be used in analyzing 'The Only Story ' by Julian Barnes. (ChatGPT)

 "The Only Story" by Julian Barnes in several ways:
Character analysis: Characters in the novel, such as Paul, Susan, and other secondary characters, by answering questions about their motivations, personality traits, and development throughout the story.

Theme analysis: Themes present in the novel, such as love, aging, and regret, and provide examples from the text to support these themes.

Style analysis: Julian Barnes' writing style, including his use of language, tone, and narrative techniques, and explain how these elements contribute to the overall impact of the novel.

Summary:  Summary of "The Only Story" by summarizing the main events and key themes in a concise and straightforward manner.

2.Character analysis

a. Discussion of the main characters.(ChatGPT)

 "The Only Story" by Julian Barnes features two main characters: Paul and Susan.

Paul is a 19-year-old man who recounts the story of his first and only love affair, which took place in the 1960s. He is introspective and introverted, and his relationship with Susan is a turning point in his life. Through the lens of his memories, the reader is invited to consider the impact that this one relationship had on the course of his life.

Susan is a 38-year-old woman who is married and has two children when she begins a relationship with Paul. She is depicted as confident, experienced, and independent, and her relationship with Paul is portrayed as a liberating experience for her. Susan is also portrayed as a complex and enigmatic figure, whose motivations and actions are not always easily understood.

Both characters are well-developed and multi-dimensional, and their relationship is central to the story. Through their experiences and interactions, the novel explores themes of aging, love, and regret, and invites the reader to consider the nature of love and the choices we make that shape our lives.

b.Comparison and contrast of the characters .(ChatGPT)

"The Only Story" by Julian Barnes features two main characters: Paul and Susan. These two characters have significant differences that set them apart from each other and contribute to the dynamics of their relationship.

Paul is 19 years old, introspective and introverted, and is at a turning point in his life when he begins a relationship with Susan. He is inexperienced in relationships and is depicted as being somewhat naive about the complexities of love and life.

Susan, on the other hand, is 38 years old, married, and has two children. She is depicted as confident, experienced, and independent, and her relationship with Paul is portrayed as a liberating experience for her. She is also portrayed as a complex and enigmatic figure, whose motivations and actions are not always easily understood.

The age difference between the two characters is a significant aspect of their relationship, and contributes to the power dynamic between them. Paul is portrayed as being in awe of Susan and her experiences, while Susan is portrayed as being drawn to Paul's youth and innocence.

Overall, the differences between Paul and Susan contribute to the complexity and nuance of their relationship, and allow the novel to explore themes of aging, love, and regret in a rich and thought-provoking manner.

 3.Theme Analysis 

a. Overview of the major themes in "The Only Story".(ChatGPT)

"The Only Story" by Julian Barnes explores several major themes, including:

Love: The novel explores the nature of love, both in terms of its ability to bring happiness and fulfillment, and its potential to cause pain and regret. Through the relationship between Paul and Susan, the novel considers the different forms love can take, and the impact that love can have on one's life.

Aging: The novel also explores the theme of aging and the way in which it affects our experiences and relationships. The differences in age between Paul and Susan are central to the story, and the novel considers the impact of time on our lives, our relationships, and our sense of self.

Regret: Regret is a major theme in the novel, as Paul reflects on the choices he made in his life, and the impact that these choices had on his future. The novel explores the idea of what might have been, and how our choices shape our lives and our relationships.

Memory: The novel is structured as a recollection of Paul's memories, and memory is a central theme in the story. The novel explores the way in which our memories shape our sense of self, and the impact that memories can have on our understanding of the past and our relationships.

These themes are intertwined throughout the novel, and work together to create a thought-provoking and emotionally resonant exploration of love, aging, and the impact of our choices on our lives.

4.Symbolism Analysis 

a. Explanation of symbolism in "The Only Story".(ChatGPT)

"The Only Story" by Julian Barnes makes use of several symbols that serve to reinforce and deepen the themes of the novel. Some examples include:

The tennis club: The tennis club where Paul and Susan meet serves as a symbol of the social hierarchies and expectations that exist in society. The tennis club represents the conservative and conventional aspects of society, and its exclusionary policies serve as a commentary on the limitations placed on individuals and their choices.

The countryside: The rural countryside where Paul and Susan retreat to serves as a symbol of freedom and escape from the constraints of society. The open spaces and natural beauty of the countryside serve as a contrast to the restrictions and expectations of the tennis club and represent a liberating alternative.

The color red: The color red appears throughout the novel, and serves as a symbol of passion, energy, and intensity. The color red symbolizes the power and all-consuming nature of love, and represents the emotions and experiences that are central to the relationship between Paul and Susan.

These symbols serve to reinforce and deepen the themes of the novel, and add a layer of complexity and nuance to the story. Through the use of symbols, the novel invites the reader to consider the themes and ideas being explored in a more thought-provoking and imaginative manner.

5.Plot Analysis 

a. Overview of the plot structure in "The Only Story".(ChatGPT)

"The Only Story" by Julian Barnes is structured as a recollection of the protagonist Paul's memories of his relationship with Susan. The novel begins in the present day, with an elderly Paul reflecting on his life and his experiences. He then embarks on a journey of recollection, recounting his life from his teenage years to his old age.

The central plot of the novel is Paul's relationship with Susan, which is depicted as a liberating and transformative experience for both of them. The novel follows the development of their relationship from its early stages, through its difficulties and challenges, to its eventual conclusion.

Throughout the novel, the themes of love, aging, regret, and memory are woven into the plot, adding depth and nuance to the story. The novel is structured as a series of interconnected flashbacks, with the present-day reflections of the elderly Paul serving as a framing device.

Overall, the plot structure of "The Only Story" serves to enhance the themes and ideas of the novel, allowing the reader to experience Paul's life and relationships in a rich and emotionally resonant manner.

 6.Conclusion

a. Discussion of the benefits and limitations of using ChatGPT in literary analysis.(ChatGPT)

The benefits of using ChatGPT in the literary analysis of "The Only Story" by Julian Barnes include:

Convenience: ChatGPT allows for quick and easy access to information about the novel and its themes, characters, and symbols, making it a useful tool for literary analysis and research.

Speed: ChatGPT can provide answers to questions in real-time, allowing for a more efficient and streamlined process of literary analysis.

Broader Perspective: ChatGPT has been trained on a large corpus of text and can provide a broader perspective on "The Only Story," taking into account various interpretations and opinions.

However, there are also some limitations of using ChatGPT in the literary analysis of "The Only Story" including:

Limited Context: ChatGPT may not always have the necessary context to provide a nuanced and in-depth analysis of the novel's symbols and themes.

Bias: As an AI model, ChatGPT has been trained on a particular dataset and may reflect the biases and limitations of the data it has been trained on.

Inability to Consider Subtext: While ChatGPT can provide information about the novel, it may not be able to fully capture the subtextual elements that are often central to literary analysis.

In conclusion, while ChatGPT can be a useful tool in the literary analysis of "The Only Story," it is important to consider its limitations and use it in conjunction with other methods and resources to gain a comprehensive understanding of the novel.

Worksheet 2

1.Explain the quotation from Julain Barnes's novel 'The Only Story: "Would you rather love the more, and suffer the more; or love the less, and suffer the less? That is, I think, finally, the only real question. You may point out-correctly-that it isn't a real question. Because we don't have the choice. If we had the choice, then there would be a question. But we don't, so there isn't. Who can control how much they love? If you can control it, then it isn't love. don't know what you call it instead, but it isn't love."(ChatGPT)

The quotation is expressing the idea that love is not a choice and that the amount we love is beyond our control. The speaker is proposing a hypothetical question "Would you rather love the more, and suffer the more; or love the less, and suffer the less?" to show that in a perfect world, one might have a choice in the matter, but in reality, love is not something we can control. The speaker argues that if we could control the amount of love, then it wouldn't be love at all, and the real question wouldn't exist.

2.Who is Uncle Humphrey? How / why is this minor character significant in the novel? (Self written)

Uncle Humphrey is Susan's uncle. She lived with her uncle after the death of her mother. Susan's uncle abused in her childhood days. This trauma has affected her.

3.While applying Gerard Genet's tool of 'Duration' in narratology, how can we explain the narrative time and discourse time in Julian Barnes's 'The Only Story'?(ChatGPT)

In narratology, Gerard Genette's tool of 'Duration' refers to the relationship between the time it takes to tell a story and the time that it covers in the story world.

In Julian Barnes's "The Only Story," narrative time refers to the duration of events that take place in the story world. This includes the passage of time between the beginning and end of the events being narrated.

Discourse time, on the other hand, refers to the actual duration of time it takes to narrate the events of the story. This includes any gaps or ellipses in the narrative, as well as any flashbacks, flash-forwards, or other temporal shifts that occur.

So, in "The Only Story," the narrative time might cover many years while the discourse time could be much shorter, as the narrator selectively chooses to focus on certain events and leave others out.

4.Write brief note on the narrative pattern with its thematic & postmodernist significance.(Self written)

Structured along Classical Line:- The narrator Paul's re- examination of his "only story" does indeed meet this prerequisite. This is his story of a life-changing, life-defining love affair, from innocence to experience, from youth to age, from infatuation to weariness.

Narrative Trope :-Time-honored narrative trope is in play here, a technique woven into the weft of story-telling from the earliest oral tradition.  

Unreliable Narrator - Paul Roberts:-Paul is a very vested teller; he's telling a subjective truth, he's arguing his case again, with himself and with us. He's an unreliable narrator.

Narration drifts from first person to second and third person:-The narration drifts from Ist person in Part One to lind person in Part Two to Illrd in Part Three.The drift from First Person to Third Person represents Paul's
dissociation, not only from his 'only story', but also from his 'own self'.

5.Is Julian Barnes's 'The Only Story' more on suffering than on love? Explain with the help of Narrative Pattern Greek etymological meaning of 'passion' which means 'suffering".(ChatGPT)

The Greek etymology of the word "passion" as "suffering" reflects the idea that love often involves suffering. In Julian Barnes's "The Only Story," the protagonist's love affair with a woman much older than him is portrayed as causing both physical and emotional suffering. This theme is consistent with the traditional definition of passion as suffering, and highlights the idea that love can be both beautiful and painful at the same time.

Passion- the Latin root of words suffering The root word carried the idea that a passion was an external force that made you do something or in  some way suffering. The root word of passion expresses the idea of being moved to action where their is pain and suffering. (Self written)

6.How would you prove that Julian Barnes's The Only Story' is a memory novel? (Self written )

Imp point in the trajectory:-
1.History is collective memory 
2.Trauma is Memory 
3.Memory & Morality 
4.Memory Prioritizes 

Illustration from the novel :-
Did he feel regret at what he always thought of as his 'handing back' of Susan? No: the proper word for that might be guilt; or its sharper colleague, remorse. But there was also an inevitability to it, which lent the action a different moral colouring. He found that he simply couldn't go on. He couldn't save her, and so he had to save himself. It was as simple as that.
No, of course it wasn't; it was much more complicated.

7.How do you explain 'rescue fantasy? (ChatGPT)

The term "rescue fantasy" refers to a common theme in literature and other forms of storytelling in which a character or protagonist is rescued or saved from a difficult or dangerous situation. In Julian Barnes's "The Only Story," the narrator engages in a rescue fantasy in relation to his relationship with Susan, an older woman whom he meets and falls in love with when he is a teenager.

Throughout the novel, the narrator's recollections of his relationship with Susan are colored by a sense of longing and a desire to rescue her from the difficulties of her life. He sees himself as a savior figure, who can protect her from the unhappiness and loneliness she has experienced in her own life. However, as the relationship progresses and becomes more complicated, it becomes clear that this rescue fantasy is not as straightforward or simple as the narrator initially believed.

The rescue fantasy in "The Only Story" is used to explore the idea that our desires and motivations are not always as clear-cut as we would like them to be, and that the line between saving someone and controlling them can be a thin one. The rescue fantasy is thus a central theme in the novel and provides a backdrop for the exploration of larger themes such as love, desire, and the power dynamics of relationships.

Worksheet 3

1.Analyze the context of the following quote: "Why do you cheat at crosswords?" 

a .Who is the speaker and to whom is this question addressed?(Self written)
 Paul to Joan

b. What is the response given by the recipient?(Self written)
Joan laughed loudly. ‘You cheeky bugger. I suppose Susan told you. Well, it’s a fair question, and one I can answer.’ She took another pull of her gin. ‘You see– I hope you never get there yourself – but some of us get to the point in life where we realize that nothing matters. Nothing fucking matters. And one of the few side-benefits of that is you know you’re not going to go to hell for filling in the wrong answers in the crossword. Because you’ve been to hell and back already and you know all too well what it’s like.’ ‘But the answers are in the back of the book.’ ‘Ah, but you see, to me that would be cheating.’

c.Is the reference to "cheating at crosswords" repeated in the novel? (Self written)
Five times

 d. What inferences can be drawn from this reference?(Self written)
Paul may have seen, Joan, so he might be asking, you cheat at crosswords. This reference also shows that cheating habit of Joan.

2.Investigate the symbolic significance of 'crosswords in the novel "The Only Story."

a. Use ChatGPT as a starting point, and then compare and contrast with
information from the teacher's blog.(ChatGPT)

In "The Only Story," crosswords symbolize protagonist Paul's intellectual decline and search for meaning as he faces old age, boredom and loneliness. The act of solving crosswords represents his attempt to piece together fragments of his past and highlights the fragility of memory. They serve as a symbol of the human struggle to find meaning in life.

(Referred from sir's blog)
The reference to ‘Crossword’ is spread across the novel. It is referred to critically as a British time-pass activity. It also makes the snootiest critique of this habit. Apart from these socio-cultural references, the crossword puzzle has symbolic significance to study the character of Joan as a counterfoil to Susan. It is also useful to study the strained triangular relationship between Paul Roberts, Susan and Gordon Macleod.

B2 .Write a comprehensive answer that summarizes the findings.(ChatGPT)

In "The Only Story," crosswords symbolize protagonist Paul's intellectual decline and search for meaning as he faces old age, boredom and loneliness. The act of solving crosswords represents his attempt to piece together fragments of his past and highlights the fragility of memory. They serve as a symbol of the human struggle to find meaning in life.

3.Analyze the following quote in the context of the novel: "The point of the story is 'safe and capable." 

a. Identify the speaker and the person to whom the quote is addressed. (Self written )

Susan to Paul

b. Describe the significance of this quote within the context of the story.(Self written)

Jack father in law of Susan told this before dying that take care of Gordon. Here is dailouge delivered by Jack to Susan:- “I’m sorry our acquaintance has been so brief, my dear. It’s been wonderful knowing you. I’m aware that Gordon can be a difficult row to hoe, but I’ll die happy knowing that I leave him in your safe and capable hands.” And then I kissed him and left the room.’

4.Evaluate the use of the phrase "moviemaker's bromide" in the novel "The Only Story."

a. How many times is the phrase used in the novel? (Self written)

2 times

b. What is the situation when this phrase appears in the novel?(Self written)

It appears in last part of novel when Paul thinking about Susan. 

c.What does it signify within the context of the story?(Self written)

Paul in memory thinking of Susan. Final recollection of memory. Paul says I wondered if I should kiss her goodbye. Paul says I looked at her but no tears in my eyes.On my way out I stopped at reception and asked where the nearest petrol station might be. The man was very helpful.


Tuesday, February 14, 2023

A Dance of the Forests

A Dance of the Forests by Wole Soyinka 

Hello Reader's 

Myself Aamena Rangwala from Department of English Maharaja Krishnakumarsinhji Bhavnagar University. This task was assigned as group activity by Yesha Ma'am. The whole play was divided among students and videos are uploaded on YouTube channels here are the links of video's. 

Here is my Video based on  task




  • Author's Information and Key Facts
 1.Divya Parmar 
 2.Bhavna Sosa

  • Characters 
1. Janvi Nakum 
2. Nidhi Dave
3. Emisha Ravani 
4. Nirav Amreliya 

  • Summary
Part 1 divided among four students 

1.Mayuri Pandya Part 1
2.Nilay Rathod Part 2
3.Vachchhalata Joshi Part 3 
4.Aamena Rangwala Part 4
Here are separate links of all four videos:-

  • Summary
Part 2 divided among four students 

1.Hinaba Sarvaiya 
2.Jheel Barad 
3.Divya Sheta 
4. Hirva Pandya 
Here is the combined link of all four videos :-

  • Summary
Part 3 divided among two students 

1.Himanshi Parmar 
2.Dhruvita Dhameliya 
Here is the combined link of two  videos :-

Thank You 

Tuesday, February 7, 2023

Gun Island by Amitav Ghosh

Thinking Activity on 'Gun Island'

About the Author Amitav Ghosh 

Amitav Ghosh, (born July 11, 1956, Calcutta [now Kolkata], India), Indian-born writer whose ambitious novels use complex narrative strategies to probe the nature of national and personal identity, particularly of the people of India and Southeast Asia.He won the 54th Jnanpith award in 2018, India's highest literary honor.He has written historical fiction and also written non-fiction works discussing topics such as colonialism and climate change.

Ghosh studied at The Doon School, Dehradun, and earned a doctorate in social anthropology at the University of Oxford. He worked at the Indian Express newspaper in New Delhi and several academic institutions. His first novel The Circle of Reason was published in 1986, which he followed with later fictional works including The Shadow Lines and The Glass Palace. Between 2004 and 2015, he worked on the Ibis trilogy, which revolves around the build-up and implications of the First Opium War. His non-fiction work includes In an Antique Land and The Great Derangement: Climate Change and the Unthinkable.

Ghosh holds two Lifetime Achievement awards and four honorary doctorates. In 2007 he was awarded the Padma Shri, one of India's highest honours, by the President of India. In 2010 he was a joint winner, along with Margaret Atwood of a Dan David prize, and 2011 he was awarded the Grand Prix of the Blue Metropolis festival in Montreal. He was the first English-language writer to receive the award. In 2019 Foreign Policy magazine named him one of the most important global thinkers of the preceding decade.

           Gun Island 


1.How does this novel develop your understanding of a rather new genre known as 'cli-fi'?

Firstly,  this novel develop very new  understanding of a genre known as 'climate fiction'which highlights the impact of climate change on human society and the natural world.There are characters like Piyali Roy,Cinta,Larry ,Dinanath etc which  are connected with the climate change and their research work are also connected with enviroment or nature.There is  importance Climate Change discussed in the novel along with that , the theme of Histrorification of Myth & Mythification of History also explored how the Global Climate affects growth and is woven around the myth in Sundarban. Throughout the novel, Ghosh explores the cultural, political, and environmental issues arising from climate change, including migration, ecological crisis, and denial of the scientific consensus on global warming. 

2.How does Amitav Ghosh use the myth of Manasa Devi to create the myth of Gun Merchant ('Bonduki Sadagar') and initiate discussion on the issue of Climate Change and Migration/ Refugee crisis / Human Trafficking.

The first person narration of the novel begins with Dinanath Dutta aka Deen who is a rare book dealer in Brooklyn,and who during a visits to  Kolkata his hometown and  accidentally finds himself in the Sunderbans chasing the myth of Bonduki Sadagar (Gun Merchant) and Manasa Devi, the goddess of snakes and poisonous creatures. As the mythical story goes, during the reign of the Mughal emperor Jahangir, the Bengali merchant Bonduki Sadagar had started on a voyage to avoid the rage of Ma Manasa. On the way he was captured by Portuguese pirates who chained him and sold him off as a slave.A merchant named Iliyas purchased him. After that they try to do business in various islands with exotic names but face either epidemics or hardships of various kinds. In the end when the Gun Merchant arrived in Venice, Manasa Devi spots him.

Climate Change 

"Gun Island' written after the book 'The Great Derangement: Climate Change and the Unthinkable" By Amitav Ghosh."Gun Island' is an answer to the questions raised in this book. Climate Change seems like unreal, similarly in novel some incidents like Cinta time and again talking to her daughter who died in accident, Story of Manasa Devi, Spirit of Gun Merchant etc are also unreal, uncanny things.
 
Migration/Human Trafficking and Refugee Crisis

There are three major reasons of migration of people.
1.War and natural disaster.
2.Religious Migration.
3.Climate Refugees.
The novel is focusing on two locations Sundarban ,Venice.Both this sites are sinking sites, that causes migration so often.

Reasons of Migration

Natural Calamities:-Lubna Khala
Cyclone and shifting. Snake bite and two deaths. (Brother, Niece)
"It was Munir’s father who saved us,’ Lubna continued. ‘He came in a boat and got us out. But after that we knew we couldn’t live in that village any more. We sold our land and moved to Khulna. Munir and I got married later that year and he decided that instead of wasting three years chasing a degree in Dhaka he would go overseas. It was easier in those days – he went first to Russia and then came to Italy, through Bulgaria and Yugoslavia. After receiving his papers he sent for me – that was almost twenty years ago."

Communal Violence:-Bilal and Kabir
Family issue of Bilal.Riots causes migration.Migration is hard.One day there was a fight.My uncle and cousins attacked my father and me, so Kabir came to our defence and knocked my uncle down. After that it was like a riot. Kabir and I managed to get away, but from then on, we had to be constantly on the run."

Poverty:-Tipu and Rafi
Life in Sundarban is very hard. - Rafi telling a story."We spent two weeks in Dhaka and then the dalal put us on a minibus, along with a group of other men. I was carrying only a backpack, and so was Tipu. We had some clothes, a bit of food, and around 250 US dollars each, that's all."

Socio-Economic conditions :-Palash
Palash migrated to Italy as a student. Wealth, education and opportunities are also sometimes causes migration.
"I came to Italy as a student, you see, which sets me apart from most Bengali migrants. Back in Bangladesh, my circumstances were completely different from theirs. Most of them are from villages and small towns, while my father is a banker, in Dhaka. My older brother is a civil servant, quite high up. I studied at Dhaka University and even have a degree in management. For some years I worked as a manager in a  multinational corporation. I used to go to work in a car every day, wearing a suit and tie."

3.Generate fan literature with the help of ChatGPT. (Promt: Generate micro fiction on Amitav Ghosh's Gun Island; Generate poem on Amitav Ghosh's Gun Island etc).

Micro Fiction 

In the stillness of the Venetian lagoon, a lone traveler named Piya sought answers about the mysterious Gun Island. Guided by the words of Amitav Ghosh, she journeyed through the shifting tides and changing climates. With each step, she uncovered deeper truths about the interconnectedness of man, nature, and the gods. As the storm raged on, Piya realized that the only way to survive the rising waters was to embrace the uncertainty of the world, and surrender to the inevitable flow of time.

Short story 
Title:"Gun Island Quest"

Once upon a time, there lived a man named Deen, who was a rare book dealer. One day, he received a request for a rare book about the Gun Island, which was said to be located somewhere in the Indian Ocean. Deen had never heard of the Gun Island before and was intrigued by the request.

So, he set out on a journey to find the book and the Gun Island. Along the way, he met many interesting people and learned about the history of the island and the legends that surrounded it. He discovered that the Gun Island was said to be cursed and that it was guarded by powerful spirits.

Despite the danger, Deen was determined to find the book and the Gun Island. He finally reached the island and found the book he was looking for, but as he was about to leave, he was confronted by the spirits guarding the island.

Deen stood his ground and, with the help of his knowledge about the island and the legends surrounding it, was able to defeat the spirits and lift the curse from the Gun Island. He left the island with the book and returned home, where he wrote his own account of his journey and the secrets of the Gun Island.

The book became a bestseller and Deen was hailed as a hero. People flocked to the Gun Island to see the place where the curse had been lifted, and it became a popular tourist destination. And so, the Gun Island was no longer a place of mystery and legend, but a place of wonder and adventure.

Poem
Title: "In the Land of Gun Island"

In the land of Gun Island, stories unfold,
Of sea-farers and traders, myths untold.
A tale of a young man on a quest,
To uncover secrets of the West.

With the power of wind and water, he sets sail,
To the delta, where the Ganges meets the trail.
In search of a legend, he meets the old,
Whose words and wisdom, a truth they hold.

From Calcutta to Venice, he travels far,
Through tides and typhoons, with the shining star.
To find a way to save the world,
From the curse of the guns that swirl.

Amitav Ghosh weaves a tale of old,
Of the stories that in our hearts unfold.
A journey of discovery, of love and strife,
In the land of Gun Island, where the past comes to life.

Word Count 
1,500
Images :-2

Saturday, February 4, 2023

The Mechanics of Writing

Thinking Activity 
The Mechanics of Writing



What is Mechanics of Writing?

The goal of the mechanics of writing is to make the writing precise and grammatically correct. It is directed to make the writing systematic and being concerned about how to be correct in spelling, punctuation, italics and so on. The mechanics of writing are the rules that must be followed while preparing research paper so that the research strategies and the format becomes systematic and consistent in all academic sectors. If one does not follow or if there are no such rules of writing then the writing would be certainly very difficult.

 Factors in Mechanics of Writing

Capitalization
Transitions
Spelling Rules
Hyphenation
Transcribing Numbers
Abbreviations
Paragraphs
Prefixes and Suffixes
Word Division

 1st Video 
Academic Writing by Kalyan Chattopadhyay


In this video Kalyan Chattopadhyay shared of importance of linguistic markers. That there are two types of writing Academic and Non- Academic which also means Formal vocab and informal vocab.

Difference between formal and informal language

Formal language is more common when we write; informal language is more common when we speak. However, there are times where writing can be very informal, for example, when writing postcards or letters to friends, emails or text messages. There are also examples where spoken English can be very formal, for example, in a speech or a lecture. Most uses of English are neutral; that is, they are neither formal nor informal.

Formal language and informal language are associated with particular choices of grammar and vocabulary.Contractions, relative clauses without a relative pronoun and ellipsis are more common in informal language.Formal vocabulary commonly involves longer words or words with origins in Latin and Greek. While informal vocabulary commonly involves shorter words, or words with origins in Anglo-Saxon.

Points discussed in video 

Formal Vocabulary, posing, exercising,you do not argue strongly ,formal language has the passive voice,Maybe, perhaps - language markers should be used, passive voice + Objective language.Topical & supportive sentences, concluding sentences - summary of your earlier argument, do not repeat topical sentences, analysis signally expression, like- however, indeed, because of, because ,Topical sentences, do not use 'I think, 'I mean markers,question- why should I agree with a particular critic?, Deal specifically with the most seminal/critical opinion etc .

2nd video 
Academic Writing: The Basics by Atanu Bhattacharya


In this video the speaker gave example and explain how we should not afraid of academic writing, He named two books which are as follows:-

1. The Scale:The Harmless proof, Book: Intellectual Impostures by Alan Sokal & Jean Bricmot. 
2. The Publication Scale: Not so Harmless Book: The Emperor of all Maladies - A Biography of Cancer by Siddhartha Mukherjee. 

A Few Takeaways 

- writing has material effects
- Avoid massive jargonization 
- Research and publication ethics
- Carefully choose the topic

Introduction 

-Writing it up: a few tips
-Create an indexed literature review
-Be sure of the triangulated methods
-DO NOT repeat the same arguments
-Use available digital tools
-Follow the literature

Digital Tools 

Digital Tools for Reference Management: 
Zotero, Mendeley, MS word,Grammarly,OWL (Online Writing Lab), Reverso,Excelsior Online writing lab

Summing up

- Linguistic choices - the "pitching" of the paper/dissertation/thesis
-Discourse choices - how do we organize it, lines of argument, etc.
-Topic choices - availability/non-availability of material; synchronic/diachronic
-Ethical choices - plagiarism, etc.

3rd Video
 The Mechanics of Writing by Atanu Bhattacharya



Formulating Propositions/ Defining

Formulating a proposition/ defining often takes the following linguistic form: Key term + verb (be)/ is defined as/ can be defined as/ may be defined as/ is often defined as + [in] which/that/where/ when + defining features.

Genre: Classification (Swales's CARS Model)
Definition
Purpose
Justification
Literature Review
Method
Argument
Conclusion

Paraphrasing

Avoid repeating yourself
Avoid quoting someone else exactly
Paraphrasing
Change your vocabulary (and do not repeat)
Develop your own 'voice' in your writing


Noun Phrases and Nominalisations:

- In 1835, Lord Macaulay who was an essayist, historian, and colonial administrator, produced his 'Minute on Education'.
- This report focuses on countries that have high birth rates.
- In Britain in 1807 a bill was defeated which would have brought elementary education to everyone.
- Many older people lived in rural areas which meant that they did not have access to good healthcare.
- This information enables the formulation of a new theory.

Stance

- The internet and the World Wide Web have provided a new medium for culture, generally labeled cyberculture, because it exists in cyberspace.
- The internet and the Web made possible a culture free of many of the constraints that operated in other media.
- It may be argued that Sherry Turkle (1997) supports the view that virtual subjects can become free of themselves.
- Arguably, a 'techno power spiral' has brought about control by a technical elite.

Hedging Language

Academic texts frequently discuss theories, evaluate evidence, and propose solutions, and mostly these things are not absolute facts. This means that authors often "hedge" or soften what they say to avoid sounding too certain. They use modal verbs (can, may), verbs (seem, appear), adverbs (arguably, significantly), adverbials (on occasion, to some extent), using impersonal structures (it, there), etc.






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